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You were sitting on your coach watching your favorite TV show since it was only raining outside and you were bored out of your mind.You sighed under your breathe but then your phone started ringing.

"Hello?" You said as you picked up your phone and turning off the TV.

"Yo (Name)! Wanna come over and hang out?"Yelled your happy-go-lucky friend Alfred.

You nearly had to move the phone away from your ear because he's always THIS loud and its kinda annoying...

"U-Uh sure...But what are we going to do?"

You could tell he was showing his goofy smile again across the phone "I'm glad you asked! You see, Arthur gets cranky during these kinds of days so Were ALL are gonna watch a movie together! Isn't that a great Idea?!"He said booming his voice even more.

Your heart fluttered a little bit when he said Arthur..Okay you admit it..You had a crush on that handsome British gentlemen, But your too scared to tell him because your both very good friends and you don't want to ruin it if he doesn't share your feelings back..

"Y-yeah, Sure Alfred I'm bored outa my mind right now and a movie would be good!"You said showing a slight smile even though no one was really their to see it.

"GREAT!" shouted Alfred "I'll send Arthur to come and pick you up! See ya then dude!"

"Okay..WAIT WHA-" before you finished your sentence Alfred already hanged up. And you were just siting there.

"Crappin' Crackers..."



~~~LE TIME SKIP OF PRUSSIA AWESOMENESS!~~~

You were all dressed and ready, You were wearing a (Color) shirt and long (Color) pants, You didn't want to dress up TOO much because it was just going to Alfred's house and watch a movie. But it still caught on your mind why Arthur would ever agree to watch a movie at Alfred's house?? Your trail of thought quickly faded away when you herd your door bell ringed.

You quickly skipped down your hallway up to the door and opened it. Standing their a Emerald green eyed Gentlemen known as Arthur Kirkland.

"Hello love, Are you ready to go?" He said with a smile

"Yeah, I'm ready.." You said as you stepped out of your house and locking the door on your way out.

Then your both ran to the car due because it was pouring outside and the last thing you ever need is to get sick during the movie.

You buckled yourself in and then the same with Arthur and then Arthur started the car and you were on your way.

You gotta say..It was pretty awkward during the drive to Alfred's house because you both didn't say a single word threw out the drive. You were just glad that the awkwardness was over when you reached to Alfred's house.

You both got out of the car and walked in Alfred's house.

"(Name)!~ Said your blonde buddy and he made his way over to hug you.

"Alfred N-" You got cut off by his Death hug of Death. He was pretty strong for a guy who plays video games and gets burgers all day...

"You wanker! Your choking poor (Name) To death knock it off!" Growled Arthur as he hit The blonde American right on the head.

"Owww~ What the heck Arthur?!" He lets you out of his grip to rub on his head.

You couldn't help but giggle, You love when these two fight, its always was so funny how you always have to break up the fight during the end.

"Okay, Okay, Come on guys let's watch that movie!" You said as you make your way to the living room and plop yourself on the coach waiting for both of them doing the same.

Arthur sat right next making it harder to get that Brit off your mind.

"Alright dudes! Let's watch this movie!"

~~~LE TIME SKIP OF HUNGARY'S FRYING PAN HITTING JUSTICE!~~

Alfred was passed out on the floor leaving only you and Arthur watching the movie...Maybe you could tell Arthur your feelings now...It was now or never..

You slowly sighed and turned your head to Arthur "Hey Arthur?.."

He turned his head to you locking his Emerald green orbs with your (E/C) orbs "Yes Love?" He said with a little tire in his voice.

"Well...I-i Um.." Your hands began to shake, Your heart started beating like crazy and your face starting glowing red. "I L-love you.." You said under your breathe and clenched your eyes shut for a waiting of a rejection to the face.

But all your felt was a warm embrace all around you..You opened your eyes and seeing Arthur hugging you.

"Oh love...I love you too, I was actually going to tell the same thing but I was too nervous to even speak," Arthur said as he brush some of your (H/C) hair away from your face. "I'm just happy that you feel the same.."

All you could do was smile at him. He was so nice to you and now you know that he loves you was more then a dream come true.

Now he slowly pressed his lips to yours ever so gently and now locking his lips with yours. You felt so happy that you hoped that this moment never ends...

"I Love you (Name)..Promise me you won't ever leave me.." said Arthur whispering in your ear.

"I wouldn't even think of it..."

The End.
THIS IS MY FIRST READER INSERT SO PLEASE BARE WITH ME PEEPS!

I think I did an okay job...

DANMIT ARTHUR Y U SO SEXY?! :icony-u-noplz:


:iconsexyenglandplz: belongs to (c) Hidekaz Himaruya


You Belong to England nao! Mwahaha!~
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nightfury150 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 11, 2015
"WHOOOO!" Alfred yelled, sitting up suddenly and raising his hands in the air in celebration. "I TOTALLY CALLED THAT ONE!"

Your face lit up bright red. "A-ALFRED!!!"

"YOU BLOODY IMBECIELE! I SWEAR YOU WERE ASLEEP!" Arthur shouted, his face an impressively similar colour to the bottom circle on a traffic light.

Alfred smirked, whipping out his phone. "Not just asleep..." He smiled, waggling the device as it showed a picture of you and Arthur kissing.

"This is totally going on Facebook, dude..." He whispered to himself.

Arthur pounced.
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HetaliaLoverGirl18 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Student Artist
Okay I loved this story like awesomeness I loved how you say on a certain time skip says LE TIME SKIP OF HUNGARY'S FRYING PAN HITTING JUSTICE I thought it was funny but great story I'm soo favoriting it
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
Awesome story!!!~
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RWBYJNPRCRDL Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Then America Enters.
America: *records you two making out and calls Prussia and France* You owe me $500.
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Pfffttt-- oh my god xD
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RWBYJNPRCRDL Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
I'm here all week, people!
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heart-of-oyster Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
~~~LE TIME SKIP OF PRUSSIA AWESOMENESS!~~~
~~~LE TIME SKIP OF HUNGARY'S FRYING PAN HITTING JUSTICE!~~
:lol:

I love this, btw.
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thanks! :meow:
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Russias-Maid Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I.Wuv.Dis.
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
:iconohstopityouplz: Ohhh You!
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Russias-Maid Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Hehehe, :iconadorableplz:
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skUllcandiexx156 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist
OOOOOOOOOOOMAAAAAAAAAAHGOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! TERESSA! this can't be your first reader insert! it's too cute! please write more! love , Becky~ ^3^
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
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NanamiOfFallingSnow Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
It was loveyl
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Thank you so much!~ :heart:
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NanamiOfFallingSnow Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
You're welcome XD sorry I spelled lovely wrong
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izzykins123 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist
I love it~~!
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
THANK YOU~ :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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mermaidfan Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
I will never ever leave you Arthur. I love you too much to try.
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
WE SHALL NEVER LEAVE ARTHUR!
NEVER~
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so cute! :iconblushplz:
Love it ~
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
THANKIE YOU SO MUCHIE! :icononionaustriaplz:
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Hiyono-chan1209 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good! Way better than my first one, that's for sure! I'm excited to see more from you!

Though one tip: It is seen often, but not a lot of people like it when time skips are labeled... Maybe instead divide it with a couple symbols? I use this: ~ , and a lot of others use this: * . Just a tip, you don't have to follow it c:
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Thank you! It means alot!

And thank you so much for the tip! I didn't know some people don't like it when time skips are labeled...I always liked them..XD Haha! Thank you I'll keep that in mind!
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Hiyono-chan1209 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!

Oh, it's no problem~ It really depends on the person and the story! Some kinds of stories it's alright, but others it's not. Feel free to use it in funny stories, but in more serious ones it's not the best idea. ^^
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
I so agree it kinda ruins the mood of the story! ^^
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Hiyono-chan1209 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! So just watch out for that and you're good ^^ I just use ~ out of habit, though you can do what you want since you aren't me, of course! xD
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
For a first, this is amazing!
(I wouldn't be able to do a one-shot this good >.>)
Love it! Big fan, and can't wait for your future stories!!
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
:iconbrohugplz: Thank you so MAWCH!
And I can't wait to write them for everyone! :iconlalalaplz:
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
np~
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Unspoken-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
For a first time that was amazing! I would oh tons of icons here if I wasn't on the dammed mobile device. Non the less I give you 20/10 stars for this!
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Thank you so MAWCH! :icontearplz:
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Random-Waffle Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO!... You did MORE than just "ok" This is awesome!!
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
ASDFGK- THANK YOU~ :iconletmehugyouplz: :iconbrohugplz: You don't understand THANK YOU it means alot I WILL WRITE MORE FOR THE SAKE OF HETALIA!~
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Random-Waffle Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!! :D

AND YES!! WRITE MOAR!!! X3
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
I WILL! I SHALL! :la:
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Random-Waffle Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:happybounce: Good!!
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was absolutely beautiful!! :D Stop doubting yourself! You did extremely well, particularly for a first. I mean, I don't think many people would be able to pull off something like this for a first try! :D Seriously, though, I loved this. I was hooked from the start, and the idea's adorable. You're fantastic. And Arthur's so in character. :'D I NEED TO HUG YOU. :iconbrohugplz:
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
It was thanks to you for helping me with it!~ :'D I really couldn't have done it without! THANKYOUSOMUCH. IMMA HUG YOU BACK!
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was an absolute pleasure! :D Aww, it's not a problem in the slightest. YOU'RE VERY WELCOME. :'D
I SHALL ACCEPT YOUR HUG. :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
WERE NOW READER INSERTS BUDDYYZZZ!~ :iconlalalaplz:
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THAT MAKES ME HAPPEH. *BROFIST*
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbrofistplz:
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVED IT! X3
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
R-REALLY?! THANK YOU IT MEANS ALOT IT'S MY FIRST! I HUG YOU NAO! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YUSH IT WAS AMAZING I LOVE READER INSERTS WITH ALL MY HEART! XD
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
SAME HERE. I :heart: themmmm!~ :D
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well this was fabulous. :3 I'm gonna email mah friend the link now because she's the real England Fangirl... XD
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Coldtyk Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Oh come on nao...Your being too nice :icontearplz:
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