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"My. Feet. Kill." You said emotionlessly as you aimed yourself right on your coach with a bag with of candy on your lap.

"Aughhh~ I can't wait to eat all of my candie!~" Groaned your American friend Alfred as he joins you on the coach.

Tonight it was Halloween and your best friend Alfred join you on your trick or treating hunt,
You were dressed up as a badass pirate and your Alfred was a crazy chainsaw guy.

To tell you the truth, you had a big old crush on the outgoing American but whenever you TRIED telling him your feelings you would just stammer on and quickly change the subject before anything else stupid happens.

And as always in your failure always end up with a big facepalm to the face.

"Yo (Name), Can we eat our candies now? I'm so hungry!" Said the blonde as he was already digging his bag of candy.

You snapped back in reality and looked back on your friend. "W-what? But don't you want to save some for tomorrow?"

"Pfttt, What? No way (Name)! On Halloween you always gotta eat the candy on the night of Halloween!" Alfred says while pouting.

God, Why does he always have to win.

You sighed and took off your pirate hat and eyepatch to see better at the American.

"Fine, but if you complain about how you have no more candy you're NOT getting any of mine!" As you started digging in your bag of treats.

He gave off one of his cheesy smiles and gave a thumbs up "Thanks!" then he starting to eat some of his candies.

After awhile of eating some candies, Alfred had a confused face and looked closer into his bag.

"Uhh..Something wrong Alfie?" You said as you were munching on a chocolate bar.

"I barely have any Snicker bars!" Said Alfred yelling into his candy bag.

You slowly raised an eyebrow "What?"

Alfred turned his body so he was now facing you. "(Name),Do you have anything Snicker bars?"

"Umm, Let's see..." You turned your face into your bag of treats and see that you had a lot of the candy.

"Yup! But why Snickers?" You said with a confused face.

"Dude! there my favorite candy ever! You have to give me some!" He said while whining.

"No way! get your own Snickers!" You shout as you hugged your candy bag.

Alfred leaned in closer to your face with a very serious glare of seriousness.

"Give. Them. To. Me." Alfred stated sternly.

There was only a dead silence for a split second till...

"MAH SNICKERS!!" You yelled and shot up from the coach and ran into the kitchen.

Alfred was shocked about your reaction but then got a devilish smirk grew onto his lips.

Alfred ran into the kitchen meeting your tense up (E/C) eyes.

You had nowhere to hide, you were backed up in a corner of your kitchen.

Alfred slowly walked up to you with your bag of candy hugging your chest.

You knew you couldn't beat Alfred, When it comes to food, he knows how to get what he wants.

Alfred took his hand in your bag and grabs a Snicker bar. Takes it out of its wrapper and puts part of the end in his mouth....But doesn't eat it.

You were so confused. He chases you into your kitchen, Gets his Snicker bar. But doesn't eat it. What was with him tonight?

Your trail of thoughts were blown away when you felt your shoulders being touched, This shot your eyes wide open seeing Alfred holding your shoulders and seeing his nose barely touching yours.

"Want some of my Snicker (Name)?" He said as he puts the Snicker bar in your mouth and started munching on it till he presses his lips to yours.

Your face was covered in red blush. You never knew Alfred liked you back. You were so happy that you gratefully kissed back tasting the chocolatey Snicker bar in your mouth.

When you both parted for air you looked in each others eyes filled with love and care for oneather.

"Can I have another Snicker?~" Said Alfred with childish voice.

"Of Course~" you said as you reach for another Snicker bar....

:heart: THE END! :heart:


I was eating a Snicker bar and this was borned.


I WENT THEIR. :icondeathstareplz:

Another halloween story....WTF.

So yeah, Its America's turn!


:iconyayamericaplz: :iconyayamericaplz: :iconyayamericaplz:

You belong to :iconheroamericaplz:
:iconyayamericaplz: Belongs to Hetalia.


*goes to bed*
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Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Of course~NOT! *gets up and tackles alfie*
Alfie: *surprised and shocked*
Me:*jumps off and runs away*MAH SNICKERS
alfie:AW HELL NAH*runs after me*
Me*trips and falls* nooooooo *hides the candy in the closet*
Alfie:*turns the corner* there you are! You deserve punishment for that~
Me: w-wait what?! *blushes*
Alfie: *picks me up and walks to the bedroom*
France: *eating popcorn* OHHH DIS GON BE GUUUUUUD!
TheRPFreak Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw how adorable. I love this :)
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Look how inspiration travels, FROM A FREAKING SNICKER BAR.

Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
"MAH SNICKERS!!" You yelled and shot up from the coach and ran into the kitchen.

That is sooooooooo me
attackonanime134213 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014   General Artist
XD that random moment where it's 2 in the morning and you are actually eating a snickers bar while reading this
emmalynncat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
/slowwly puts the snickers bar down
Let's just-
ILIKEFANDOMS Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pocky game with a Snicker bar. 
IGame101 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeeehhh snickers yo
Coldtyk Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
snickers all the way

y essss 
IGame101 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mm yeSSS

snickers icecream omg you should try it
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